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Rated 5 Stars by ScriptPimp.com!

"As a beginning screenwriter, Mr. Hohl's professional insight guided me in developing a marketable property. His constructive analysis was thorough, and his enthusiasm inspired me to work harder to create my vision. After using David Hohl's HotScripts twice, I give my highest recommendation. His reasonable fees are money well spent." -Ari Mello (Writer of CAESAR)

David Hohl
www.HotScripts.biz
E-mail: hotscript@comcast.net
(310) 496-0999

With over ten years as a script consultant, and a five star rating as a story doctor, David Hohl brings screenwriters of all levels the needed boost to get market ready. Both his reasonable fee, and very personal attention has made David a well sought after consultant and mentor.

Script Analysis for your feature

1. A complete, multiple reading of your script (once for flow, pacing, and readability, and the second for detailed story analysis.)
2. Recorded Audio Notes on your script, suggestions on how to improve your re-write and get it ready for sale. Provided in a detailed MP3 for you to listen during your commute, or whenever convenient.
3. A script matrix graphic explaining how you were ranked in certain areas
4. Email support if you have questions on the notes
5. Guaranteed work by David Hohl, not an intern or assistant

$395 flat rate (120pages or less). Don't confuse cheap coverage services with script analysis services. If you have questions, email us.

Additional phone consulting: $125/hr

Testimonials:

"Your comments about the main characters arc were especially helpful. Most important to me, you understood what I was trying to accomplish and gave vital suggestions for developing the script's potential. I look forward to working with you in the future and I'd recommend your services to any aspiring screen writer."
-Robert Hendrickson (writer of SAY GOODNIGHT, ROMEO)

"As a beginning screenwriter, Mr. Hohl's professional insight guided me in developing a marketable property. His constructive analysis was thorough, and his enthusiasm inspired me to work harder to create my vision. After using David Hohl's HotScripts twice, I give my highest recommendation. His reasonable fees are money well spent."
-Ari Mello (Writer of CAESAR)

"David knows how to hone in on a script's weaknesses and was willing to custom--taylor my coverage for specific questions I had. Your money is well spent here."
-Jay

Note: Jay's script was optioned after analysis.

"David's script analysis helped me look at my screenplay from a new perspective, allowing a more creative and solid re-writing process. I'd suggest using him before any rewrite, and certainly before sending any script out to market."
-Martin Wheeler (Produced Writer of: 7 Seconds, Black Dawn, The Detonator)

And, as a personal screenplay mentor…

“As a beginner screenwriter, David Hohl's expertise on how to write a screenplay has been priceless.  David's patience , perseverance, and unique ability to ask the right questions has challenged me as a writer not to settle for ordinary , but to dig deep and strive for extraordinary writing, that will capture an audience's attention. His one on one attention has given me all the tools I needed to begin my journey into writing my first screenplay!!!  David is very motivating and encouraging and always positive! I am fortunate & thankful to be working with such a gifted writer and teacher!”
- Holly Angel
 
Contact:
David Hohl
www.HotScripts.biz
E-mail: hotscript@comcast.net
(310) 496-0999
Twitter: ScriptMD

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